Thursday, September 20, 2018

Draft 1: The Concrete Advantage

In the article “The Concrete Advantage” from Green Rooftop website, Green Rooftops claims that hydrophobic technology removes hazardous factors for users while assuring monetary returns. Concrete green roofs are sturdy and does not degrade over time. Green Rooftop states that use of waterproof concrete has helped to defeat the biggest overthrow of green roofs by removing the part found most speculative by handlers. Constructor’s job are made easier since there is no use of membranes, eliminating the detriments in the build-up. The task can be accomplished quicker as there is no concrete-cure waiting time before inclusion of the membrane, resulting in cost effectiveness for the user. Root barriers are unnecessary as growth of roots are eradicated with the use of waterproof concrete. In the case where maintenance is needed on the green roof, a simple inoculation of polyurethane grout can be induced at the bottom, minimizing any harm towards budding seedlings.

1 comment:

  1. Dear Randi,

    Good summary you have written. The citation you have state it clearly. The main points are elaborate. I would like to provide some suggestions. Hope you would find it helpful.

    1.)Some key points could replace the connecting words with the article instead of repeatedly using Green rooftops.
    2.) Some words may not have the intended meaning. For example, " budding seedlings ".

    Hope you would read my summary and could give me some feedback so we could improve in our writings. Thank you.

    Yours sincerely,
    Ethen Siew

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